Mar 14, 2012

Vengeance

words uttered in anger
unknown of the pain created
breaking apart the bonds
leading to a state of chaos


ripples on the surface
whrilwinds deep down
vengeance, melting down the heart
pay back is sweet, when its old.

8 comments:

  1. kopavum pakayum, nalla oru topic aanu. kurechum koodi ezhuthamayirnu..

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    1. aalojichu kootivechu ezhutharilla.. appo thonnunnathu kurichidum. pinnedu update cheyyum. athanu sheelam :) and yes, anger and revenge, rather pain and revenge are awesome topics. :)

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  2. Read it many times and couldn't get it. Stupid me, I know! :(

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    1. i know. it takes a little more time :P read the last line. it says it all :)

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    2. What do you mean by "payback is sweet, when it's old"? What do you mean by "old"? Did you mean that the pleasure achieved from payback is proportional to the time duration? The longer the time duration, the higher degree of pleasure is achieved? :S

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    3. that, sweet heart, is my point too. the longer the time duration, the higher the degree of pleasure achieved.

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