she couldnt stop the tears rolling down her eyes.
he couldnt find a way also.
She hugged him tight for one last time, he was lost.
finally he whispered in her ears,
every single drop of tear that falls down from your eyes will take away one day from my life.
she cried even more.
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Beautifully penned down... Really painful thoughts
ReplyDeleteConcise yet intense! And undeniably honest.
ReplyDeleteNicely written :)
I wonder if the ending can be seen as partly satirical..?
PS: Wonderful template :P
Fingers crossed till July.
ReplyDeletebrilliant lines, but one hopes that life at that end is well.......
ReplyDelete@Dudo
ReplyDeleteyep, really painful that it takes life out of life :)
@et
ReplyDeleteat times, being honest is the best thing to do, and yes, you really did get the idea behind the last line.
and the template credits goes to an awesome friend of mine :) his name is Rahul Anand :)
@shomoita
ReplyDeletemay be he doesnt deserve it :)
@Rakesh vanamali
ReplyDeletemuch appreciated comment bro. such an inspiration to come back and pen down more.. all is well at the other end :)
@Shravan May b she doesn't deserve him??? What say it can always be other way round.
ReplyDelete@Dudo
ReplyDeletemay be, if they both are together, end up being together, the purity wont stay.. may be that :)